by Scorch » February 18th, 2015, 11:23 pm
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by Stiopa » February 23rd, 2015, 2:17 am
by Prophet_of_Doom » February 23rd, 2015, 8:11 am
Stiopa wrote:Minor spelling error in Mission 8 - Breakthrough:
Troops who deployed via AD: Combat Jump and scattered off the far edge of the enemy deployment zone do not count has having broken through.
That should be "as", I believe
I will correct that.
A few minor changes I could think about: Placing the number before the mission name ("8 - Breakthrough" instead of "Breakthrough 8", unless that was intentional?
That went a bid back and forth as I was writing, I ended up liking it better that way. I don think it matters.
I'd also add a paragraph about total required number of crates/antennas/OM's into the Rules section and version number on title page for quick version check.
the paragraph on the total of required material is in the mission table on page 6. That has been very important for me. The idea is that people who do not have all the stuff they need for the mission can see that at a glance and decide to choose another mission. The reason this is not found in the missions themselves is that there is a strict self-imposed rule about one mission has to fit on one page.
A version number does make sense. At the moment, I am changing stuff as I get feedback. Hmmmm..... I will do this. Now. From now on, if you download, you will get V1.2 and counting. Thanks for the suggestion.
All in all I find the whole system very interesting, can't wait to playtest it. Great work, thanks!
by Calmdown » February 25th, 2015, 6:44 pm
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